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March 31, 2009

Bawara mann, Dekhne chala ek Sapna !!


***The post has been intentionally deleted due to copyright protection. This story in its updated/edited form is under consideration to be published in an anthology of short stories. Will update the space soon with further details.***

27 comments:

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Hi Amith,

Thanks for making me a part of your space...

keep in touch...

Cheers
Mahesh

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Hmmm...
sure amit...

Done already..:)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Mahesh

grt...keep in touch ..cya :)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Dont take this so easy..:P
i will dig into everything if i like your post..

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Mahesh

Don't worry...i dnt let go a person easily if he/she doesnt dig into my post :)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Hmmm lets see....what can you do :D

this post really got me wondering amit....
Rachna?? i didnt understand that name...was it a girl??
Story was good...
Nowadays people leave stories like this and i like this kind of stories where u leave the rest on readers...

Apart from all this, i think u can go ahead with part 2 in this...

Cheers...

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Mahesh
yup...it was a girl.....n she was in love with a girl...she was a lesbian..n part2 , well lets c what holds in the future :)...if i get a good response...i may write it fr sure...i have a vague idea hw to take it further :)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Hmmm thats ok...
Just think about it once....
This is the first time i am talking to someone through comments...

I digged almost four posts of yours... i think that's enough..
if u feel like telling me best of yours..u can..
i will surely read it for you.. :P

Cheers again

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Mahesh

It was great talking to you....n thanks for all the lovely comments...well u dont choose among ur babies...right? You can browse through the blog and comment wherever u feel like...i wld appreciate all the comments...thanks again :)

cheers,
Amit

Phoenix said...

cant say i can relate to it.. because im straight, but the emotions are the common point and the delicate handling of the storyline was simply superb.. very well done :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Phoenix
even i am straight...but then the beauty of writing lies in exploring the unexpected ..anyways...thanks...i appreciate ur view :)

Anonymous said...

wat a twist.....hehhhehe
unique one...keep it up....

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Anonymous
Thanks...n u better start posting with ur name :P

Preeti said...

nice one !!1 liked the twist in the end ..

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Preeti

Thanks buddy :)....it was meant to surprise ppl in the end !!...btw thanks for following me..on the blog..that is :D...cheers ..Amit:)

Crowscious said...

Good story... nice mix of affection and lust :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Crowscious
Thanks Yaar....glad ppl r liking it :) ..keep in touch :)

Girl Next Door said...

Interesting :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Girl Next Door
Thanks:)

CutePriya said...

I love your superb sense of digging deep and expressing the heartfelt emotions. Great Story....I liked "Breakups are never easy. People don't realize that breakups are sometimes as bad as deaths."

More than death break-ups are like hell....specially when the relationship you shared mattered to you the most...

Seriously, our heart is as innocent as a child...

Love your writing.

Cheers,
Priya :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Priya
That was real heart-felt comment, i must say...thanks a lot for those words..it means a world to me...n ya..break-ups r bad...bt then they always give u opportunity to learn something about people...n about relationships :)

Cheers,
Amit

rh3a said...

damn! i thot it was goin sumwhr nice.. :D
well-written, defintly!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@rh3a

:D, I am happy i surprised you :)

Thanks a lot !

Cheers,
Amit

The Pink Orchid said...

i did see it coming ..but 'i' turned out to be a woman.. lol..that shocked me.. :) lol..the introduction part actually made me look forward to them having a nice time. but lo.. rachna ..:)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@TPO

Lol, don't make assumptions while reading! U may be in for a shock, i should start putting disclaimers on my blog now :D

glad u liked it:)

cheers,
amit

Satans Darling™ said...

I told you, I love the twists! I loved this story... I have read a similar one before too.. But this was wonderfully written!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Ashrita

Ahh, i love giving twists and surprises uc !! Well, this one was purely to titillate and surprise audience! But, the other one u read was probably written with an agenda in mind !

Cheers,
Amit