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this post really got me wondering amit.... Rachna?? i didnt understand that name...was it a girl?? Story was good... Nowadays people leave stories like this and i like this kind of stories where u leave the rest on readers...
Apart from all this, i think u can go ahead with part 2 in this...
@Mahesh yup...it was a girl.....n she was in love with a girl...she was a lesbian..n part2 , well lets c what holds in the future :)...if i get a good response...i may write it fr sure...i have a vague idea hw to take it further :)
It was great talking to you....n thanks for all the lovely comments...well u dont choose among ur babies...right? You can browse through the blog and comment wherever u feel like...i wld appreciate all the comments...thanks again :)
cant say i can relate to it.. because im straight, but the emotions are the common point and the delicate handling of the storyline was simply superb.. very well done :)
I love your superb sense of digging deep and expressing the heartfelt emotions. Great Story....I liked "Breakups are never easy. People don't realize that breakups are sometimes as bad as deaths."
More than death break-ups are like hell....specially when the relationship you shared mattered to you the most...
@Priya That was real heart-felt comment, i must say...thanks a lot for those words..it means a world to me...n ya..break-ups r bad...bt then they always give u opportunity to learn something about people...n about relationships :)
i did see it coming ..but 'i' turned out to be a woman.. lol..that shocked me.. :) lol..the introduction part actually made me look forward to them having a nice time. but lo.. rachna ..:)
Ahh, i love giving twists and surprises uc !! Well, this one was purely to titillate and surprise audience! But, the other one u read was probably written with an agenda in mind !
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Hi Amith,
Thanks for making me a part of your space...
keep in touch...
Cheers
Mahesh
Hmmm...
sure amit...
Done already..:)
@Mahesh
grt...keep in touch ..cya :)
Dont take this so easy..:P
i will dig into everything if i like your post..
@Mahesh
Don't worry...i dnt let go a person easily if he/she doesnt dig into my post :)
Hmmm lets see....what can you do :D
this post really got me wondering amit....
Rachna?? i didnt understand that name...was it a girl??
Story was good...
Nowadays people leave stories like this and i like this kind of stories where u leave the rest on readers...
Apart from all this, i think u can go ahead with part 2 in this...
Cheers...
@Mahesh
yup...it was a girl.....n she was in love with a girl...she was a lesbian..n part2 , well lets c what holds in the future :)...if i get a good response...i may write it fr sure...i have a vague idea hw to take it further :)
Hmmm thats ok...
Just think about it once....
This is the first time i am talking to someone through comments...
I digged almost four posts of yours... i think that's enough..
if u feel like telling me best of yours..u can..
i will surely read it for you.. :P
Cheers again
@Mahesh
It was great talking to you....n thanks for all the lovely comments...well u dont choose among ur babies...right? You can browse through the blog and comment wherever u feel like...i wld appreciate all the comments...thanks again :)
cheers,
Amit
cant say i can relate to it.. because im straight, but the emotions are the common point and the delicate handling of the storyline was simply superb.. very well done :)
@Phoenix
even i am straight...but then the beauty of writing lies in exploring the unexpected ..anyways...thanks...i appreciate ur view :)
wat a twist.....hehhhehe
unique one...keep it up....
@Anonymous
Thanks...n u better start posting with ur name :P
nice one !!1 liked the twist in the end ..
@Preeti
Thanks buddy :)....it was meant to surprise ppl in the end !!...btw thanks for following me..on the blog..that is :D...cheers ..Amit:)
Good story... nice mix of affection and lust :)
@Crowscious
Thanks Yaar....glad ppl r liking it :) ..keep in touch :)
Interesting :)
@Girl Next Door
Thanks:)
I love your superb sense of digging deep and expressing the heartfelt emotions. Great Story....I liked "Breakups are never easy. People don't realize that breakups are sometimes as bad as deaths."
More than death break-ups are like hell....specially when the relationship you shared mattered to you the most...
Seriously, our heart is as innocent as a child...
Love your writing.
Cheers,
Priya :)
@Priya
That was real heart-felt comment, i must say...thanks a lot for those words..it means a world to me...n ya..break-ups r bad...bt then they always give u opportunity to learn something about people...n about relationships :)
Cheers,
Amit
damn! i thot it was goin sumwhr nice.. :D
well-written, defintly!
@rh3a
:D, I am happy i surprised you :)
Thanks a lot !
Cheers,
Amit
i did see it coming ..but 'i' turned out to be a woman.. lol..that shocked me.. :) lol..the introduction part actually made me look forward to them having a nice time. but lo.. rachna ..:)
@TPO
Lol, don't make assumptions while reading! U may be in for a shock, i should start putting disclaimers on my blog now :D
glad u liked it:)
cheers,
amit
I told you, I love the twists! I loved this story... I have read a similar one before too.. But this was wonderfully written!
@Ashrita
Ahh, i love giving twists and surprises uc !! Well, this one was purely to titillate and surprise audience! But, the other one u read was probably written with an agenda in mind !
Cheers,
Amit
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