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May 19, 2009

Aaj Bhi......


aaj bhi har 21 ko tu zindagi mein aayi jaise lage....
aaj bhi har 17 ko tu kahin kho gayi hain aaisa lage...
aaj bhi har raat tera haseen sapna band aakhon mein aa jata hain....
aaj bhi tera chehra in sitaron mein kahin ghum sa jata hain....

aaj bhi shor mein kahin teri hansi sunai deti hain....
aaj bhi bheed mein jaise ek tanhai si panah deti hain....
aaj bhi tere bin mehfil mein akelapan aa jata hain...
aaj bhi teri yaadon ka jaise dil mein karwaan lag jata hain...

aaj bhi tu kahi muzh mein zinda sa lage...
aaj bhi tu juda hokar kahin muzh se judi se lage...
aaj bhi dil teri yaad se bhara bhara sa lage...
aaj bhi jeevan mein kahin teri kami se lage..


aaj bhi dil ke jharokhon mein jaise roshni aa jati hain....
aaj bhi teri muskhurhat par jaan nisar ho jaati hain....
aaj bhi tere liye jaise yeh duniya ruksat kar de...
aaj bhi tere tabaasum se hum woh baatein phir kar le...

aaj bhi lekin pata hain ki yeh sab hum kar nahin sakthe...
aaj bhi lekin pata hain ki hum phir saath aa nahin sakthe....
aaj bhi lekin dil ko naa jaane kyun aisa yeh kuch yaad aata hain...
aaj bhi lekin shayad hum aap se thoda aur pyar kar pathe...

22 comments:

The Pink Orchid said...

inna saara dard.. main to padhti hi reh gayi.. khoobsurat.. i always say this... the most beautiul poems are all sad ones.. :)

you write well in hindi too.. :)

fms1988 said...

Amit :D I cant take the smile off my face !I swear i enjoyed every bit of it...I knew it, you will be real good at hindi too & this one is centuries old..shuru shuru mein u were so good by now you will be a genius :) !I cant wait for the rest.

Aaj bhi tere seene mein kahin chupe jazbaat hai
Aaj bhi qalm utha ne se hichkichana nahi
Aaj bhi panne pe likhte ja dil ka fasana
Kyunke.. Aaj bhi tum jazbaat lafzon mein bayan kar sakte ho

Thats spcly for u :D
Keep writing.
Fatima

Hopeless Romantic said...

@TPO

Pehle Pyaar ka Pehla gaam :D

I agree, sad poems are the most beautiful to read and most painful to write.

Thanks for the compliments !

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Fatima

Thanks a lot for those nice lines.It was so sweet of u to pen down those for me. It means a lot to me.I appreciate the appreciation :D

Over the period of time, i have lost touch with hindi...but ya posting this brought a lot of memories back :)

Thanks,
Amit

Girl Next Door said...

AWESOME :)

Really great work...

Keep Posting :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@GND

thanks buddy :) keep visiting and reading :)

cheers,
amit

Little Girl Lost said...

amit- very very poignant... waiting eagerly for more...

Hopeless Romantic said...

@LGL

Thanks baby:) I would keep them pouring every now and then :)

Cheers,
Amit

CutePriya said...

Mazza aa gaya Amit... Ek to itna acha template...upar se itni dilchasp aur deep poetry..sone pe suhaaga...lage raho...

Dher saara pyaar,
Pyari Priya

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Priya

Dhanyawad, shukriya and i dnt know more synonyms of saying thanks in Hindi :D

Thanks a lot,
Amit

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Man....what the fish..:P

Such a nice composition....:) A good attempt yaar... I liked the concept of attaching every moment, feelings.expressions,pain with "Aaj Bhi"...

Here and there a little rhyming adjustments are needed..but over all its a nice concept...

Woo..Aaaj bhi...:)

Anonymous said...

Amit, maybe I feel I have thought of these things earlier..but you just strike a few chords everytime.

Megha Gupta said...

u write amazingly good in hindi too...

somethings never fade or go away...
but are treasured forever...
beautifully portrayed!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Mahesh

Please read the PS,i wrote this centuries back as a 16 year old.At that time, who cares about rhyming compositions, its the feeling which are more important.

Thanks a lot for dropping by and sharing your thoughts !

Keep rocking,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Anonymous

Sometimes ringing those chords again and again can be painful. Think about changing the ring tone of those chords, or better make new chords in life.

All the best,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Megha

Pretty true, like i have treasured this poem for close to 10 years now.Even when i was posting it, it seemed like i have written it yesterday only !

Some love stories live forever :D

Cheers,
Amit

Netika Lumb said...

'LOVE'LY :)
VEry profound..must say ..

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Netika

Thanks buddy :)

Cheers,
Amit

bondgal_rulz said...

Sigh!!!

Love!!

Great work man...very beautifully penned. :)

Cheers

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Bondgal

Thanks, Glad u liked it :)

Cheers,
Amit

Satans Darling™ said...

aaj bhi har 21 ko tu zindagi mein aayi jaise lage....
aaj bhi har 17 ko tu kahin kho gayi hain aaisa lage...

Beautiful..

Thank you fms for encouraging HR to share his lovely work with us :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Ashrita

:))))

Thank u so much :)

Hi'5 to FMS :P

Cheers,
Amit