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May 29, 2009

Hum Ne yeh Pyaar Kyun Kiya !


hum ne ye pyar kyun kiya....
raaton mein chandni ka intezaar kyun kiya...
baaton mein shararat ka intezaar kyun kiya...
hoton ki kaliyan khilne ka intezaar kyun kiya....

hum ne ye pyar kyun kiya....
raazewafa mein dooriyan ka intezaar kyun kiya...
awaazon mein har sada ka intezaar kyun kiya...
tanhaiyan mein mehfil sajne ka intezaar kyun kiya

hum ne ye pyar kyun kiya....
ishq ko junoon banne ka intezar kyun kiya...
mohabbat ke tofaan ka pahuchne ka intezar kyun kiya...
pyar ke ehsaas ko pighlane ka intezar kyun kiya....

hum ne ye pyar kyun kiya....
rahon mein guzar jaane ka intezar kyun kiya....
bahon mein bas jaane ka intezar kyun kiya....
seene mein utar jaane ka intezar kyun kiya....

hum ne ye pyar kyun kiya....
gham ke badal chaane ka intezar kyun kiya....
dard ke karwaan uthne ka intezar kyun kiya....
dukh ke ambaar chatne ka intezar kyun kiya....

hum ne ye pyar kyun kiya....
dil mein gharonde baanne ka intezar kyun kiya....
aankhon mein nami aane ka intezar kyun kiya....
veerano mein bahar aane ka intezar kyun kiya....

hum ne ye pyar kyun kiya....
har sawaal mein jawaabo ka intezar kyun kiya....
jab hum har jawab se yehi sawal ka jikar karthe hain ki...
hum ne ye pyar kyun kiya....

PS: Sometimes the biggest remedy of pain in love is love itself, that is arguably the biggest irony of being in Love !

36 comments:

The Pink Orchid said...

sawaalo ko parinde udte dekhe hain,
ye parinde ghoslo tak waapas nahi aate,
bas kisi jawaab ki khoj mein udte rehte hain,
kuchh jawaaab sawaalo ka katl kar dete hain,
aur kuchh jawaab kayi aur sawaal khada kar dete hain..

ishq se juda har sawaal, aisa hai ki uski khoobsurati bus sawaalo mein hai,
inke jawaab naa hi mile to achha,
dard ki dawa naa hi mile to achha,
ishq to aashiq us dard ke liye karta hai,
jo aashiqui ke aagosh mein milti hai,
aur us dard ke liye bhi jo,
tanhaayi ka ho,
tadap ka ho,
aur intezaar ka ..


jise intezaar ka dard na mila,
usne pyaar kya kiya!!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@kajal

Ahh...that was such a sweet gesture...mera to man kar raha hain is 'scribbling' ko comment se delete karke post kar doon :P

Awesome comment...best comment on my blog so far !

Loads of Love,
Amit :D

fms1988 said...

Wah Amit :D do i need to tell u how much i enjoyed reading this...?:)

(Kajal...ur lines are PERFECT !!i LOVE THEM !)

gargi said...

wah wah amit bhai...cha gae ap to!!!... :p
amazing!!
i guess i prefer hindi poetry over the english..at least this one made me do this!... i want more of these..please.. :D
keep writing!!..cuz m waiting! :p


@ Pink Orchid

Beautiful writing!!... loved it :)
tc!!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Fatima

Thanks buddy :)

Kajal's line made it more special for me, so thanks again to her !

Happy wedding weekend!
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

:O, bhai kaun bhai, yahan koi bhai nahin hain tera :D

I am not writing them now, i am just importing them one by one from the other blog ! I wld keep on doing it, glad u liked it !

Keep visiting for more !
Amit

comfortably numb said...

whtever could be said as a reply has already been said in the 1st comment ny Kaj:D
@post
beautiful...from the heart stuff:)
gud gng man!!!

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Hopeless Romantic said...

@CN

Hey, thanks buddy ! Glad u liked it !

@Kajal,

mere 2 khokhe bhijwa deta hoon comment ke, teri kafi tarif ho chuki hain :P

Cheers,
Amit

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Satans Darling™ said...

Wow, what a poem :) I suck when it comes to writing in Hindi, but this is just perfect!

And a great "scribbling" by Kajal too :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Ashrita

Hey,welcome back to my blog! good to cu here!

Thanks for the compliment to me and kajal :P

Try reading more in hindi, you will improve ur writing in hindi over a period of time!

Cya around,
Amit

Netika Lumb said...

Awww,,this is soo sweet. Really touching..and Kajal's lines just complement your's..
Very nice :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Netika

Thanks dear for showering all the compliments :)

Pat on the back (and a kick on the ass,lol, kidding) to kajal :)

Cheers,
Amit

I, Me and Myself said...

@amit

aahhh how wonderful....i never knew u write such amazing poetry amit....

n kan asusual urs was gr8...

cheers

bondgal_rulz said...

Ye pyar kiya kahan? Ye tto bas...ho gaya!! :)
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Reading real great hindi poetry after a loooong time!!

Lovely poem...and Kajal's lines were just the icing on the cake. :)

Cheers

Hopeless Romantic said...

@IMM

Thanks for the compliment,do read my first one under hindi poetry label...more to come, stay tuned :)

Keep visiting,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Isha

lol, true but i wrote it after falling in love, cldnt help it uc :)

read more under hindi poetry label,more to come:)

I appreciate u dropping often here!

Keep visiting!
AKG

Megha Gupta said...

kyun hizr k shikwe karta hai...
kyun dard k rone rota hai...
ab ishq kiya hai to sabr bhi karle...
isme toh yahi kuch hota hai..

very poignant and striking!!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Megha

Thanks for those lovely day! it made my day !

Love,
Amit

Ms.R. said...

Aww ain't that sweet. Two thumbs up :) Remedy of pain in love is love.. How true :D

Hopeless Romantic said...

@R

Hey,thank you very much !

True Indeed :) keep coming!

Cheers,
Amit

Little Girl Lost said...

but what? tera naam dala hai na!...
you are turning into a lyricist :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@LGL

Thanks for the compliment. Are kahan hain, kaun sa hain..mujhe nahin mila !!

I missed it kya?

Amit

nsiyer said...

Wow well little. You seem to live your blog's name. I did not think you write Hindi well.

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Iyer Sir

I have not written Hindi poetry in a very long time, these are all from my old collection which i am sharing now with all !

Glad u liked it :)

Regards,
Amit

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

The most noticable thing about your poems is you always pick up a theme and you follow the same till the end...

here also you had done the same like you did in your previous poem..

I liked this poem very much for the above reason and for its variety in each stanza..

I would say usage of those rhyming words like ikraar,bekaraar etc would add more to it... or say usage of intezaar looked more unrealistic at at few points...

Its just my thought...other than that its beautiful as i said earlier...

NOM

Cheers..

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Mahesh

Generally such kind of poems are written when you are in a particular mood,hence the fascination and repetition of flow of thoughts !

Also,the poem was my amateurish attempt around 9 years back. I am sure if i write today, the things which u have pointed out will surely be noticed and hopefully removed.

Great to know how deeply you read it !

Thanks,
Amit

Kaddu said...

In fact, love is the ONLY remedy of pain in love! At least that's what I feel!

उन्मुक्त said...

हमने प्यार क्यों किया - इस सवाल का जवाब तो किसी के पास नहीं है।
सुन्दर भाव हैं देवनागरी में क्यों नहीं लिखते।

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

I am glad you took it positively :-)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Kaddu

Very true, and add to it only those who have experienced it can tell with their all heart :)

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Unmukt (hope i have the spelling right :P)

I have left writing Hindi poetry a long time back, but u never say never!

May be i need an inspiration back in my life to start it again :D

Thanks for visiting! Do come back again!

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Mahesh

If things are said in the right tone, right manner, right way and right intonation, who the hell will not take it positively :P

Cheers,
Amit

Pretty Me!! said...

PS: Sometimes the biggest remedy of pain in love is love itself, that is arguably the biggest irony of being in Love !


so damn true !! sigh!

coming abck to the post .. this was indeed beautiful !!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Pratibha

Hey, welcome to my blog! Thanks for dropping by and sharing ur thoughts!

Keep coming back!
HR