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May 1, 2009

When Love Took a U-Turn ....


***The post has been intentionally deleted due to copyright protection. This story in its updated/edited form is under consideration to be published in an anthology of short stories. Will update the space soon with further details.***

57 comments:

Netika Lumb said...

Nice.. I wish he doesn't take a U-Turn...:)

muthu said...

the flow and the idea of reducing the time was good man... the idea has real potential...

but i thought that the ending was a bit of a cliché... but thats just me...

I was really like expecting something big and twisted at the end.. and you finished it off all mushy...

Anonymous said...

Really nice one. But is it truth or fiction?

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Netika

I wish the same too :)

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Muthu

Well, read my other posts. I generally twist all the fictional tales in the end. For a change, i wanted a 'cliche' end. That's just me...i wanted readers to be happy this time around after reading my blog...keep visiting !!

Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Anonymous

Thanks! Whether its truth or fiction, doesn't really matter ! What matters is that u enjoyed reading it ! I hope u did !

Keep in touch !
Amit

gargi said...

wow wow wow!..loved it!..AGAIN! :)

cheers!

NEHA said...

2 good...!!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Gargi

He he...thank u ...thank u...after the long post comment last time around, it was relief to see short and sweet comment ;)

Cheers!
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Neha

Thanks Neha :)

Do visit again ! Keep in touch !

Cheers,
Amit

P M said...

u manage to write amazingly beautiful stories..loved dis one..

Hopeless Romantic said...

@PM

Hey, Welcome to the blog ! Thanks for visiting n showering me with that compliments. It means a world to me !

DO visit again ! Keep in touch !

Cheers!
Amit

Quirky Mon said...

awesome narrative, amit. this is good! :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Quirky Mon

Hey, thanks a lot buddy :) N i am looking for the info u require; give me a few more days !

Cheers,
Amit

fms1988 said...

:D Amitttt...Im speechless i wont b able to say in words how much i loved this truly amazing !Thanks for being such a great writer.
*Bows*

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Fms

Thanks for all the compliments dear :)..not sure i deserve such heavy words :P

I love writing n sharing my thoughts...hope u like it next time i read !

Cheers!
Amit

Anonymous said...

@Hopeless Romantic

Of course I enjoyed reading it. I enjoy reading all your posts. I am not done with them yet, but will work on that. I am following your blog, at least for now.

Thanks.

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Anonymous

Cool ! Keep reading n letting me know ur views on each of them. Do visit again n keep in touch !

Love,
Amit

bondgal_rulz said...

OMG !! You are bloody good at this stuff ya !! Keep the keyboard tapping. :P

Cheers

P.S. Sorry for not being around lately. Had exams on. Seems like I've missed out on a lot. Will catch up, dontcha worry. :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Bondgal

Lol, thanks for that lovely gesture! n hope to continue the keyboard tapping :D

No issues, you can always catch up with the posts. Hope ur exams went well !

Cheers!
Amit

PLP said...

Nice story! Awww, it was so romantic!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@PLP

Hey, welcome back the blog! Hope ur doing great ! be Good !

Thanks, keep in touch !

Cheers!
Amit

Phoenix said...

aah :)

just the way i like it!! :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Phoenix

Thanks buddy! Hope ur doing well after college !

Cheers,
Amit

Anonymous said...

Amit, another addition to the thought process..I hope every individual understands the actual meaning of Love !!

Thanks !!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Anonymous

Nice thought ! But, from where it came ...just out of the blue ! or am i missing something ?

Let me know,
Amit

Anonymous said...

It definitely came from ur post..I am sure it has some relation somewhere..how can everything be fictitious ?? :)

If it is..Then also a commendable job from your side..Your blogz name is just apt !!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Anonymous

well,its part fiction n part truth. See if you look closely, i have mentioned new Delhi terminal ID which has opened on 19 april 2009. So now, u can imagine from where i was coming from. I didn't wanted to divulge details of who people were involved in this and how i got involved in it, as it was too personal too divulge on a public forum :)

I am glad someone like the blog name...i just adore it :)

N i am glad whoever ur, u take so keen interest in my posts. I feel touched !

Cheers,
Amit

Dr. Acula said...

W-O-W mayyyn!!! :D :D

I like Airport endings. Naice. :D

Loved it like anything!!!! :)

Cheers. :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Acula/Siya

He he...airport endings r like fairytale endings ..rem Jaane tu ya jaane na or chalthe chalthe...mushy n romantic :)

Thanks a lot :) keep in touch !

Cheers,
Amit

The Pink Orchid said...

ah.. you left me all sighing Amit.. :) it was so so so so good! why do two people take so much of time in saying it? but then i guess this ultimate urge and wet-eyed confessions are always closer to heart, than those greeting card, teddybear or flower confessions of love.. :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@TPO/Kajal,

Thanks :) I guess magic of love is when it comes slowly and unexpectedly...different ppl do take more time to understand themselves n their feelings..but then that's the exact reason why love is still an enigma :)

Take care,
Amit

Smita said...

wow!!! Mushy at core :-)

Can we expect Part 2 of this sweet story??

Little Girl Lost said...

amit- very very sweet story yaar... what's with all this mush?

P M said...

hey hi im priyanka mehta[pm] who commented on ur previous to previous post. i changed my settings n profile name n stuff.
i have invited u to read my blog on ur blog address mentioned in ur profile here. i hope u get d invitation.
in case u dnt den let me knw by leaving a comment here itself.
keep writin :)
thanks.

sarika said...

hii amit!
luv ur stories...u r really good.
keep up d awsum work!!
tc..

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Smita,

Thanks..well i generally don't write incomplete stories..i don't like loose threads..once i write..i move on from that particular "zone"...tough to say i wld write part 2...bt ya may be some other story with different names n situation starting where this one ended :)

Tk care n do visit again !
amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@LGL

Thanks dear :) ...ahh..i wish i cld have answered that....i guess its an outlet of something hidden deep inside n waiting to come out for years...plus i love telling tales :P

Love,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@PM

Hey, priyanka ..i have got ur request n wld soon visit ur blog. Keep in touch ! wld love to see u again here !

Cheers,
amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Sarika

Thanks buddy :) I guess this is ur first visit here to my blog. if that's the case, a warm welcome n keep in touch ! Do visit again!

Cheers,
AKG

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Sarika

Your blog is not accessible. either make it public or send me a request on my email id , i.e if u want me to read it :P

Cya ard,
AKG

How do we know said...

OMG.. its been suchhh a long time since i read such a sweet, mushy love story.. m going to try and remember ur blog for more. . thanks!! i cld use more of these stories..

Hopeless Romantic said...

@how do we know

Hi, welcome to the blog ! Thanks for all the compliments ! Do visit here again! It would be a pleasure to see you around!

I didn't get the last line of u "using" my stories. Plagiarism is strictly not allowed ;)

Thanks,
Amit

P M said...

hi amit..thanks a lot for followin my blog
im already following urs..
keep writing :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@PM

No issues :) thanks for following me :)

Keep blogging:)
Amit

Satans Darling™ said...

First time here and I am loving it, loved the story!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Satans Darling

Hi, welcome to the blog space! Thanks for dropping by, commenting and following the blog, all in one go:)

Do visit again! Keep in touch !

Cheers,
Amit

varu..... said...

Beautiful piece...Amazingly written..I just loved the entire episode of Aaakriti and Bhanu....Keep up the good work!!!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Varu

Hi, welcome to the blog ! Thanks for the compliments :) would surely keep on writing :)

Do visit again ! love to cu around:)

Cheers!
Amit

Shwetha Maiya said...

Wonderful idea of reversing the time. :) Good post. Will keep visiting. Chao. TC. :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Shweta

Hi, welcome to the blog and thanks for the compliment !

Do visit again,would b good to have u here again !

Tk care,
Amit

rh3a said...

aah, that read made me feel so good! only if such things were true! such a happy-happy post..thank u! :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@rh3a

Hi,welcome to the blog ! Thanks for dropping by, glad it made u feel good :)

Do visit again !

Cheers,
Amit

PS: Sex apart, this is a true story which happened after the new indigo terminal was opened on 19 april,2009 at Delhi airport.So, ur wish granted !

rh3a said...

:)
u know what, ur lucky to be surrounded by wonderful people!
or maybe, u observe the beauty in lil the things in life n wind a story around it!

Hopeless Romantic said...

@rh3a

Hmmm....its actually a combination of both. I have been in and out of friendships, became sick of half-hearted meaningless relationships so much, that now i have started seeing beauty in the little things around me. I have become quieter, a better observer and may be a better person, and may be more lonelier.

Anyways, i should stop ranting :)

Cheers,
Amit

Ms.R. said...

it was shooo shhuueeettt. guess alls well that ends well :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Ms. R

Hmmm..true indeed !

Thanks for dropping by after so long ! Ok, no more complaints :)

Cheers,
Amit