***The post has been intentionally deleted due to copyright protection. This story in its updated/edited form is under consideration to be published in an anthology of short stories. Will update the space soon with further details.***
Well, read my other posts. I generally twist all the fictional tales in the end. For a change, i wanted a 'cliche' end. That's just me...i wanted readers to be happy this time around after reading my blog...keep visiting !!
Of course I enjoyed reading it. I enjoy reading all your posts. I am not done with them yet, but will work on that. I am following your blog, at least for now.
well,its part fiction n part truth. See if you look closely, i have mentioned new Delhi terminal ID which has opened on 19 april 2009. So now, u can imagine from where i was coming from. I didn't wanted to divulge details of who people were involved in this and how i got involved in it, as it was too personal too divulge on a public forum :)
I am glad someone like the blog name...i just adore it :)
N i am glad whoever ur, u take so keen interest in my posts. I feel touched !
ah.. you left me all sighing Amit.. :) it was so so so so good! why do two people take so much of time in saying it? but then i guess this ultimate urge and wet-eyed confessions are always closer to heart, than those greeting card, teddybear or flower confessions of love.. :)
Thanks :) I guess magic of love is when it comes slowly and unexpectedly...different ppl do take more time to understand themselves n their feelings..but then that's the exact reason why love is still an enigma :)
hey hi im priyanka mehta[pm] who commented on ur previous to previous post. i changed my settings n profile name n stuff. i have invited u to read my blog on ur blog address mentioned in ur profile here. i hope u get d invitation. in case u dnt den let me knw by leaving a comment here itself. keep writin :) thanks.
Thanks..well i generally don't write incomplete stories..i don't like loose threads..once i write..i move on from that particular "zone"...tough to say i wld write part 2...bt ya may be some other story with different names n situation starting where this one ended :)
Thanks dear :) ...ahh..i wish i cld have answered that....i guess its an outlet of something hidden deep inside n waiting to come out for years...plus i love telling tales :P
OMG.. its been suchhh a long time since i read such a sweet, mushy love story.. m going to try and remember ur blog for more. . thanks!! i cld use more of these stories..
Hmmm....its actually a combination of both. I have been in and out of friendships, became sick of half-hearted meaningless relationships so much, that now i have started seeing beauty in the little things around me. I have become quieter, a better observer and may be a better person, and may be more lonelier.
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Nice.. I wish he doesn't take a U-Turn...:)
the flow and the idea of reducing the time was good man... the idea has real potential...
but i thought that the ending was a bit of a cliché... but thats just me...
I was really like expecting something big and twisted at the end.. and you finished it off all mushy...
Really nice one. But is it truth or fiction?
@Netika
I wish the same too :)
Cheers,
Amit
@Muthu
Well, read my other posts. I generally twist all the fictional tales in the end. For a change, i wanted a 'cliche' end. That's just me...i wanted readers to be happy this time around after reading my blog...keep visiting !!
Amit
@Anonymous
Thanks! Whether its truth or fiction, doesn't really matter ! What matters is that u enjoyed reading it ! I hope u did !
Keep in touch !
Amit
wow wow wow!..loved it!..AGAIN! :)
cheers!
2 good...!!
@Gargi
He he...thank u ...thank u...after the long post comment last time around, it was relief to see short and sweet comment ;)
Cheers!
Amit
@Neha
Thanks Neha :)
Do visit again ! Keep in touch !
Cheers,
Amit
u manage to write amazingly beautiful stories..loved dis one..
@PM
Hey, Welcome to the blog ! Thanks for visiting n showering me with that compliments. It means a world to me !
DO visit again ! Keep in touch !
Cheers!
Amit
awesome narrative, amit. this is good! :)
@Quirky Mon
Hey, thanks a lot buddy :) N i am looking for the info u require; give me a few more days !
Cheers,
Amit
:D Amitttt...Im speechless i wont b able to say in words how much i loved this truly amazing !Thanks for being such a great writer.
*Bows*
@Fms
Thanks for all the compliments dear :)..not sure i deserve such heavy words :P
I love writing n sharing my thoughts...hope u like it next time i read !
Cheers!
Amit
@Hopeless Romantic
Of course I enjoyed reading it. I enjoy reading all your posts. I am not done with them yet, but will work on that. I am following your blog, at least for now.
Thanks.
@Anonymous
Cool ! Keep reading n letting me know ur views on each of them. Do visit again n keep in touch !
Love,
Amit
OMG !! You are bloody good at this stuff ya !! Keep the keyboard tapping. :P
Cheers
P.S. Sorry for not being around lately. Had exams on. Seems like I've missed out on a lot. Will catch up, dontcha worry. :)
@Bondgal
Lol, thanks for that lovely gesture! n hope to continue the keyboard tapping :D
No issues, you can always catch up with the posts. Hope ur exams went well !
Cheers!
Amit
Nice story! Awww, it was so romantic!
@PLP
Hey, welcome back the blog! Hope ur doing great ! be Good !
Thanks, keep in touch !
Cheers!
Amit
aah :)
just the way i like it!! :)
@Phoenix
Thanks buddy! Hope ur doing well after college !
Cheers,
Amit
Amit, another addition to the thought process..I hope every individual understands the actual meaning of Love !!
Thanks !!
@Anonymous
Nice thought ! But, from where it came ...just out of the blue ! or am i missing something ?
Let me know,
Amit
It definitely came from ur post..I am sure it has some relation somewhere..how can everything be fictitious ?? :)
If it is..Then also a commendable job from your side..Your blogz name is just apt !!
@Anonymous
well,its part fiction n part truth. See if you look closely, i have mentioned new Delhi terminal ID which has opened on 19 april 2009. So now, u can imagine from where i was coming from. I didn't wanted to divulge details of who people were involved in this and how i got involved in it, as it was too personal too divulge on a public forum :)
I am glad someone like the blog name...i just adore it :)
N i am glad whoever ur, u take so keen interest in my posts. I feel touched !
Cheers,
Amit
W-O-W mayyyn!!! :D :D
I like Airport endings. Naice. :D
Loved it like anything!!!! :)
Cheers. :)
@Acula/Siya
He he...airport endings r like fairytale endings ..rem Jaane tu ya jaane na or chalthe chalthe...mushy n romantic :)
Thanks a lot :) keep in touch !
Cheers,
Amit
ah.. you left me all sighing Amit.. :) it was so so so so good! why do two people take so much of time in saying it? but then i guess this ultimate urge and wet-eyed confessions are always closer to heart, than those greeting card, teddybear or flower confessions of love.. :)
@TPO/Kajal,
Thanks :) I guess magic of love is when it comes slowly and unexpectedly...different ppl do take more time to understand themselves n their feelings..but then that's the exact reason why love is still an enigma :)
Take care,
Amit
wow!!! Mushy at core :-)
Can we expect Part 2 of this sweet story??
amit- very very sweet story yaar... what's with all this mush?
hey hi im priyanka mehta[pm] who commented on ur previous to previous post. i changed my settings n profile name n stuff.
i have invited u to read my blog on ur blog address mentioned in ur profile here. i hope u get d invitation.
in case u dnt den let me knw by leaving a comment here itself.
keep writin :)
thanks.
hii amit!
luv ur stories...u r really good.
keep up d awsum work!!
tc..
@Smita,
Thanks..well i generally don't write incomplete stories..i don't like loose threads..once i write..i move on from that particular "zone"...tough to say i wld write part 2...bt ya may be some other story with different names n situation starting where this one ended :)
Tk care n do visit again !
amit
@LGL
Thanks dear :) ...ahh..i wish i cld have answered that....i guess its an outlet of something hidden deep inside n waiting to come out for years...plus i love telling tales :P
Love,
Amit
@PM
Hey, priyanka ..i have got ur request n wld soon visit ur blog. Keep in touch ! wld love to see u again here !
Cheers,
amit
@Sarika
Thanks buddy :) I guess this is ur first visit here to my blog. if that's the case, a warm welcome n keep in touch ! Do visit again!
Cheers,
AKG
@Sarika
Your blog is not accessible. either make it public or send me a request on my email id , i.e if u want me to read it :P
Cya ard,
AKG
OMG.. its been suchhh a long time since i read such a sweet, mushy love story.. m going to try and remember ur blog for more. . thanks!! i cld use more of these stories..
@how do we know
Hi, welcome to the blog ! Thanks for all the compliments ! Do visit here again! It would be a pleasure to see you around!
I didn't get the last line of u "using" my stories. Plagiarism is strictly not allowed ;)
Thanks,
Amit
hi amit..thanks a lot for followin my blog
im already following urs..
keep writing :)
@PM
No issues :) thanks for following me :)
Keep blogging:)
Amit
First time here and I am loving it, loved the story!
@Satans Darling
Hi, welcome to the blog space! Thanks for dropping by, commenting and following the blog, all in one go:)
Do visit again! Keep in touch !
Cheers,
Amit
Beautiful piece...Amazingly written..I just loved the entire episode of Aaakriti and Bhanu....Keep up the good work!!!
@Varu
Hi, welcome to the blog ! Thanks for the compliments :) would surely keep on writing :)
Do visit again ! love to cu around:)
Cheers!
Amit
Wonderful idea of reversing the time. :) Good post. Will keep visiting. Chao. TC. :)
@Shweta
Hi, welcome to the blog and thanks for the compliment !
Do visit again,would b good to have u here again !
Tk care,
Amit
aah, that read made me feel so good! only if such things were true! such a happy-happy post..thank u! :)
@rh3a
Hi,welcome to the blog ! Thanks for dropping by, glad it made u feel good :)
Do visit again !
Cheers,
Amit
PS: Sex apart, this is a true story which happened after the new indigo terminal was opened on 19 april,2009 at Delhi airport.So, ur wish granted !
:)
u know what, ur lucky to be surrounded by wonderful people!
or maybe, u observe the beauty in lil the things in life n wind a story around it!
@rh3a
Hmmm....its actually a combination of both. I have been in and out of friendships, became sick of half-hearted meaningless relationships so much, that now i have started seeing beauty in the little things around me. I have become quieter, a better observer and may be a better person, and may be more lonelier.
Anyways, i should stop ranting :)
Cheers,
Amit
it was shooo shhuueeettt. guess alls well that ends well :)
@Ms. R
Hmmm..true indeed !
Thanks for dropping by after so long ! Ok, no more complaints :)
Cheers,
Amit
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