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July 30, 2009

Pata Nahin Us Raat Mein Aisa Kya Tha...


Sometimes in Love there can be moments which changes your line of thinking, it changes the way you approach life, it changes the way you create your relationships. There can be nights (or days) when you are so moved by a person's gestures and subtle nuances that you completely fall for him/her, they take the most special compartment in your heart. They throw such curve balls on to you that how much harder you try, you just can't take off your eye balls from them. Here is an account of one such night .....

pata nahin us raat mein aisa kya tha...

un dhadkthe dil ke jazzbaaton mein aisa kya tha ...
un aati jaati saanson ke mehak mein aisa kya tha..
us bheege jism ke khushboo mein aisa kya tha...
un kaapti unglion ki sarsarahat mein aisa kya tha...
un chatphathe haathon ke bandhan mein aisa kya tha....
un surkh hoton mein kaisa adhoorapan tha...
un ki baaton mein woh shararat ka asar kya tha...
un ki hansi mein woh pyar ka shor kya tha...
un ki nazaroon mein woh izhaar-e-wafa kya tha...
un ke chupke se kiye ishaaron mein kya apnapan tha..
us chehre ki muskurahat mein woh raaz kya tha...
us pagal man ki diwaneege mein aisi kya madhoshi thi
usse dekh aaj bhi bus yahin socthe hain ki....

pata nahin us raat mein aisa kya tha...

46 comments:

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

Such beautiful words! Aur dil se nikli hui baat ko "amateurish" nahin kehna chahiye :)

anupama said...

U were good 10 years back too!

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

Anonymous blog ko saamne laya jaaye.. bada kuchh interesting hain wahaan... khooobsurat poetry..

P.S. and what's with that 'making love with blog' people online count.. rabba!!

bondgal_rulz said...

10 yrs. back!! Aila !!

Tab se hi tu hopeless hai?? :P :D

Great poetry mate. :)

Cheers

"Guptaji" said...

@Jal Pari

I called it amateurish since i know i can write much better than that, but ya i agree with u, things straight from the heart always hold special place in your heart :)

Cheers,
Amit

"Guptaji" said...

@Anupama

I am good now also :D

lol,
Amit

"Guptaji" said...

@Kajal

Lol, saamne la to raha hoon ek ek karke, aur kya baacche ki jaan legi :P

PS: well, that's like if you are reading me, you are spreading (making) love with me or my blog :D

Love,
Amit

"Guptaji" said...

@Isha

Haan, haan hoon mein hopeless,kya karegi :D

Jaa tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi tujhe ek hopeless mila tha :D

Thanks for the compliment!

Cheers Mate,
Amit

gargi said...

hayeee guptaji...*sighhh*..... kash mera dildar bhi aisi shayari karta mere lie... lol =D

awesomeeeee poetry dude!!! im in L-O-V-E all over again.. ;)
hehe..

hope ur concentrating on ur studies in brisbane..stay away from those gori chori... =P

take care!!..
xox

Priya said...

yea..very true...some moments change you for ever...i really appreciate the way you bring these emotions to words...
and yes..you are free to follow yur personallized rules for tag. :) and no, its not about only the first impression, had it been so, i wldn't have waited for you to come up wth new posts. your posts really touches a chord somewhere... :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Gargi

lol, are i was just experimenting with the display name, i thought why not my pet name given by my female friends, so "Guptaji" came :P

Ru in love again, but with whom :P
Hope i am not that unlucky, lol :D
Aur koi shayari kare ya na karen, usse pyar kam nahin hota hain, isn't it ! So be happy with what you have and keep it that way. Tera yahan koi chance nahin hain waise bhi :D

Your last line, was that a comment or a warning :D In any case, i am deep down in books, no time for Brisbane babes, and I am quite sure they are waiting with deep breath for me to get free (Oops, how modest :D). Most of the entries (atleast stories and poems) are written way back, just posting them to maintain consistency on the blog and making sure people don't forget the ever internal - The hopeless Romantic :D

Love,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Priya

Aww, thanks so much ! You are so understanding, i tell u :D

OK, jokes apart, wait for my coming post, i am in detail explaining my personal blogging rules, because i have mentioned int quite a few times in my post and people have asked me offline as well, what are your so called hi funda's for bloggers. So i thought why not answer all of them at one go.

I am glad i touched your chords (wherever they are present in your body, cheap, i know :D), but i love writing and take it quite seriously (at times a little bit too much :P). But in the end its all fun and letting yourself free in this blogging world.

Cheers,
Amit

Shadows of life said...

Gupta ji - Us raat mein kya hoga....siva ek hope ke?

Have just one hope and your life goes by faster than you can think of!

NEHA HADKAR said...

well m not much into shayaris and poetry...but one can expect anything from hopelessly romantic person like u...dated 10 yrs back?...hmmm interesting...
hav a nice time ...tc

Hopeless Romantic said...

@SOL/Vimmi

Well, you are correct in your own way but what if that night gives u all the hope in the world as mentioned in the poem, and then next day yo woke up to realise it was just a dream, and nothing else. So, that would end to a hopeless situation, got the drift :D

Welcome to my blog, good to cu here!

Keep coming back,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Neha

Why people make assumption after reading my posts. In what way the post suggested i dated someone ten years ago !!

Arghh....i need a break, lets have a kit kat :D

Stay well,
Amit

Phoenix said...

i absolutely agree and that wasnt amateurish at all...in fact i loved the way u put an abstract thing into words...beautiful

Shadows of life said...

First of all how do ya know my 'real' name?

Secondly, even if it was a dream, it tells you clearly that there is someone, somewhere waiting for ya...Ever heard of 'law of attraction'

Gracious for welcomes...keep writing and I will keep reading.

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Phoenix/Raka

Well, thanks a lot for those nice words, but I am sure i have written better stuff than this!

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Vimmi

A good writer always know its readers :P

OK, jokes apart, i went through one of your blogs, in which in one of the posts,one of the person has commented taking your one and only name :D

Law of attraction working in dreams, wow, this is a bit new for me. I have seen and heard these laws breaking even in real world, and you are hopeful they would come true even in 'dream' world. Kudos!

Keep visiting,
Amit

Shadows of life said...

Yupp....love is the only thing which works on HOPE....as you must have stated in SOME hopeless post.

Thank you for reminding me of that comment, gotta delete it!

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sujata said...

that was good!! and considering the fact that even ten years back you were asking questions its more beautiful..love is always an enigma..why it happens? when and what course it takes..is a story in itself..the younger generation takes it for granted but the older we grow the more questions emerge..

I, Me and Myself said...

aawww amit senuous romantic heart touching....wow and u say an amateurish attempt....i strongly disagree...gr8...n srry here aftr a long time just took a brk from blogging....

comfortably numb said...

dude, it's wow!!!

Shruti said...

Whoa... this was anything but amateurish...

stunning!
am still floating in those words (:
beautiful!

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Hopeless Romantic said...

@Sujata

Love is an enigma for everyone, young and old included. When we young, we keep on making mistakes with whom we fall in love, when we are old, we keep on making mistakes with whom we should NOT fall in love. Problem with love is it doesn't come with a production or an expiry date, it always make its impressions in its own unique way!

Thanks for the nice words!

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@IMM/Shweta

hey, welcome back buddy! good to see you here again! Thanks for the appreciation!

keep visiting!
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@CN

hey, thanks dude! :)

Hi'5
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Shruti

Don't float too much, risk of getting drowned and catching flu :D

Good to see you here, thanks for the appreciation!

Cheers,
Amit

Priyanka Agrawalla said...

Are wah!! lagta hai 10 saal pehle se hi aapne poetry me mastery paa li thi..

bahut hi acha likha he aapne.. :) padhke acha laga.

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

first of all, mujhe poem achchi lagi...

curiosity is what makes this poem beautiful.. good one dude..

10 years back? tum jabse hi pyaar, ishq mein pad gaye the kya..?

wonder how come :P

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Priyanka

lol, thank u so much for those nice words. But it just started as a flagoff point to start with it, "The inspiration" came early in my life i guess so!

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Mahesh

Thanks dude, well curiosity in love can be a very enigmatic for sure.

10 years back, i was in class 10, so not that bad. These days people have started falling in love in class 7 :D

Cheers,
Amit

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Hopeless Romantic said...

@SOL

Wow, what an observation. I am sensitive because i am Human and i have no doubts about it like some other people :D

Cheers,
Amit

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Suresh Kumar said...

This is not amateurish.

This is Direct Dil Se and I enjoyed every bit of it.

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Suresh

Thanks dude, i am glad u like it! But nothing like your stories! i like them a lot!

Cheers,
Amit

Megha Gupta said...

i told u earleir also..u are amazingly good in hindi as well... very nice... full of feelings and emotions...and so real!!

kuch toh baat thi..
unki adaaon mein...
ya meri muhobbat mein...
aakhirkaar akele hum hi toh
gunahgaar nahi!!!


love
Megha

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Megha

Ahh...thanks a lot dear. Tune hi pechanaa hain mere andar ka shaitaan :D

Great scribling..someone is turning into a poetess...Ahem Ahem..!

Cheers,
Amit

Nidzzi said...

god those hindi lines esp. chatpatate hathon.. was like read some hindi love stories. good post

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Nidhi

lol, well all those lines which can convey your feelings spot on are always good, isn't it? :)

Keep coming back,
Amit