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August 23, 2009

Kuch Is Tarah...


Heartbreaks are never easy to handle in life. It can break your confidence, shatter your spirits, makes you feel miserable and worse - you loose trust in people. A lot of things come to an end with a broken relationship; those mushy 1 am goodnight calls, those pangs of affection while buying Archie's card for your beloved, those all afternoon mall walking sessions or those 20 minutes grabbing of coffee at Barista after work. Following are some of the thoughts at the end of a relationship...

Kiya tha pyaar jisse hum ne zindagi ki tarah

Woh miltha hain aaj hum se ek ajnabi ki tarah....

Sitam to bas yeh hai ke wo bhi na ban saka apna
Wo kar raha tha mohabbat hum se dillagi ki tarah......

Jisko rakhte the dil main hum aarzoon samajh ke
Woh basa hai aaj dil main ek bebasi ki tarah...

Jiske khayaal se hi muskaara uthta tha yeh dil
Woh aaj baithaa hai in ankhoon mein ek naami ki tarah....

Jiske milne se lagta tha, har khushi jaise mil gayi
Wo ab darathaa hain humein ab ek kami ki tarah....

Jis ko hum milathe the sab se apni
dost keh kar
Woh kar raha hain aaj dosti humse dushmani ki tarah...

Bhaada kar meri dil ke aas, usne saath choor diya
Na jaane kyun, wo mila hain humein ek badnasibi ki tarah

Mushkil yeh hain, socha tha jisse sunayenge hum apne dil ka haal
Woh mehfil mein baithaa hain aaj ek ajnabi ki tarah....

PS:
Problem with love is that at the end of the day, it always moves on, sometimes with a purpose of finding another relationship or sometimes may be another heartbreak.......

45 comments:

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

enjoyed! awesomely delicately beautiful..!!

and i am curious yet again about your anonymous blog..


Rane

Manju said...

don't forget the chocolate icecream, loadssssss of chocolate icecream! it's therapeutic for broken hearts ;P

http://whysoserioustoday.blogspot.com said...

wah - wah :P
oh so senti :s

Deepika said...

Truly touching...

I am Running short of words!!

Nikita said...

*lets out a sigh and tries not to think too much about heartbreaks* :P

Aman said...

you totally described what I felt...and its kinda weird when you have things and words unspoken...i have this gift i always wanted to give..bt i always waited for the right time..lol, now i dunno wht to do with it!

Suresh Kumar said...

Dardh bara gana.... Nice one... brings out the pangs of separation quite effectively

Saim said...

love the lines...there is something about such lines which evoke long lost memories.
Pangs of separation, angst and a bruised broken heart:(

Anonymous said...

Very very nice poem....loved your choice of words!

gargi said...

beautiful!!... =)

xox

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Kajal

Thanks for the compliment, and curiosity is good in life, it yearns you to appreciate good things in life even better ;)

Love,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Manju

I wrote this one back in 2007, and i am sure if not chocolate ice cream, i did drank a lot of beer :D. that's equally therapeutic

Thanks,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Sugi

What else you expect on Hopeless Romantic blog :D

Love,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Deepika

Aww, so sweet, but do leave some words for appreciation :)

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Nikita

Not thinking about something does not deviate the inevitable, it always catches up!

All the best,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Aman

Gift it to his kids :D. Just kidding, well that's what makes love so enigmatic, it keeps itself under wraps and at times when it opens up, the recipient of the gift is gone!

But, love is always new and there is always next time!

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Suresh

Thank you so much, glad you liked it!

Keep coming,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Saim

Sorry dude, i touched the raw nerve, it was never meant to hurt someone. I just shared it with you all. But there is more to life than just loving and loosing someone, trust me!

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Anonymous

Thanks, happy you liked it, keep coming back!

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Gargi

thanks for the compliment!

Cheers,
Amit

Pooja Mahimkar said...

aww...i love this post

NEHA said...

oye amit ..

i do appreciate any one writing poems coz even after many failed attempts i jus cant ..

i liked this 1 it was reli beautiful and made me go awwww ..

cant i get an exclusive sneak peek in ur anonymous blog? ..

:)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Pooja

Glad you liked it so much!

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Neha

lol, don't worry, have a heartbreak, i am sure you would start writing poems, i started writing after my first heartbreak, inspiration uc :D

What is the need to sneak peek, i am posting everything here ;)

Love,
Amit

Netika Lumb said...

:(
I have not liked this :(
Kya yaar..ye to banta hi nahi
This makes me dread a break up..

Another thing, I didn't like this line
"Na jaane kyun, wo mila hain humein ek badnasibi ki tarah"

Badnasibi nahi yar.. Nope..

http://whysoserioustoday.blogspot.com said...

I agree wid Neetika completely :)
Y so saddy saddy Amit ... hmm :D ???
n I like new rose pik :)
very pretty :)
Cya

LIFE: A Collection Of Beautiful Memories! said...

i told u earlier...tat u write amazingly gud in hindi as well!
bt honey trust me har cheese ki happy endings nahi hoti...an its always a gud lesson..brings out the best in u!

bheegte rahe hum baarish mein
kabhi maangi kisi se panaah toh nahi...
hasratein poori na hon toh na sahi..
par khwaab dekhna koi gunaah toh nahi!

so cheer up!!
love!
Megha

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

I love the poetry. Its beautifully written. And yes heart breaks are hard. Very hard. Har insaan ko shayar bana detay hain :). I hope you are in a better place today :).

Americanising Desi said...

Jiske khayaal se hi muskaara uthta tha yeh dil
Woh aaj baithaa hai in ankhoon mein ek naami ki tarah....


haeyyyy dukhti ragg pe haath rakh dia

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Netika

lol, kahen itni senti ho rahi hain, even i was not that senti when i wrote it 2 years back :D

Bad things happen in life, but you always move on, sometimes for good and better things!

Cheer up!
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Sugi

Lol, soul sister agreeing with each other :D , and i wrote it 2 years back, i am NOT Senti now :D

Thanks for the compliment of the pic, i blogger friend gifted it 3 months back, i finally got the time to put it across ;)

Cheer up girls,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Megha

Thanks for the compliment,u hit the nail on the head, u always learn from bad experiences!

You are becoming an awesome poetess day by day, nice scribbling of thoughts! thanks for writing them here and sharing with me!

Love,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Jal Pari

oh ya, i started writing poetry when i had my first heartbreak at 16 :D, ya i started very early, uc :D

thanks for liking it,i am perfectly fine, single and happy!

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Seher

lol, well that's the magic of poetry, touches you all at the wrong places!

Cheers,
Amit

bondgal_rulz said...

Ouch.

But beautiful. :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Isha

Zor ka jhatka dheere se laga kya :D

Cheers,
Amit

Nidzzi said...

wow amazing poem full of emotions u rite so well. i can understand heart breaks are difficult. after thinking so much we choose one person to give our heart to take it back its tougher and killing

Hopeless Romantic said...

@Nidhi

Hmm, thanks for the compliment! Heart breaks are tough, but then its part of life, and you always moves on , you have to, there is no other option in life!

Cheers,
Amit

Satans Darling™ said...

The lines are so touching, but the after feel has left me in thoughts... Good work

Hopeless Romantic said...

@ Ashrita

Aww, thank you so much, it made me feel good too :D

Love,
Amit

Richa said...

dil hamara ho gaya na-ummeed aur nakaam,
kitna aaya pyaar mein mazaa poochhte hain!

khud hi churaye hamare shabd arth matlab,
kyon ho gaye hain hum bezuban poochhte hain!

itne sawaalon ke baad hain soch mein hum gum,
ke wo kya chahte hain aur kya poochhte hain!


The paragraph above the poem was equally beautiful... and yes, heartbreaks are never easy to handle!!

P.S. sorry to pen down few lines of my own... they were just connecting :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

@ Richa

Thanks for writing those lines, they are better than mine, i am quite sure. I am a very amateurish writer in Hindi and haven't written for a very long time. Time to get back to it soon, i guess!

Cheers,
Amit

Olive Perry said...

My name is Olive Perry from USA After being in relationship with smith for seven years,he broke up with me, I did everything possible to bring him back but all was in vain, I wanted him back so much because of the love I have for him, I begged him with everything, I made promises but he refused. I explained my problem to someone online and she suggested that I should rather contact a PROPHET harry that could help me pray to bring him back but I am the type that never believed in prayers, I had no choice than to try it, I mailed the Prophet harry email prophetharryprayerhome@yahoo.com, and he told me there was no problem that everything will be okay before two days, that my ex will return to me before two days, he pray for me and surprisingly in the second day, it was around 4pm. My ex called me, I was so surprised, I answered the call and all he said was that he was so sorry for everything that happened, that he wanted me to return to him, that he loves me so much. I was so happy and went to him, that was how we started living together happily again. Since then, I have made promise that anybody I know that have a relationship problem, I would be of help to such person by reffering him or her to the only real and powerful Prophet who helped me with my own problem and who is different from all the fake ones out there. Anybody could need the help of the spell caster, his email prophetharryprayerhome@yahoo.com) you can email him if you need his assistance in your relationship or anything.

Shannon smith said...

I am shannon by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my husband after three(3) years of marriage just because another woman had a spell on him and he left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address aisabulovespell@gmail.com , have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a woman had a spell on my husband and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my husband back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my husband. Thanks for Dr.Aisabu. His email: aisabulovespell@gmail.com.

Shannon smith said...

I am shannon by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my husband after three(3) years of marriage just because another woman had a spell on him and he left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address aisabulovespell@gmail.com , have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a woman had a spell on my husband and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my husband back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my husband. Thanks for Dr.Aisabu. His email: aisabulovespell@gmail.com.